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The conclusion of the Tim The Enchanter saga. Tim uses his magical powers to sculpt and shape women to his will. Transformations include breast expansion and women with animal hybrid characteristics.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 5.00
Hoobalami
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this one... You should write screenplays (hopefully with some BE in them-- we need more BE in movies!)
Corben
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Surprised that there arent more downloads/comments here. Liked this A LOT- it was unique and sexy. Some may be put off by the animalistic features that Erica got as part of her transformation, but you didnt make it weird.
I would encourage any skeptics to try stories like this on for size because I was surprised in a good way. You are really coming into your own as a writer. Keep it up!
Doktor Hoo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I will second ccp by saying "yes". You are an awesome writer. A cast of wonderful characters, and amazingly descriptive. I look forward to reading more of your stories-- and please write more, this place needs more stories like this.
ccp
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very well written, clever and fun... i liked the details and descriptions, and the ending was something out of a movie. Even tho the series is over, keep writing please!!!
Twigboy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written and articulate story..Been following this series for a while so it was good to see it get the ending it deserved. A+
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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