The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ethereal VisionQuestionair
Questionaire part 3
Here we go with part 3!  Jamey is taken to a dance club by Rebekah
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

WOW you're a sexy writer. I never knew. :D

This story's very hot. I'm rating it by the first three chapters up and I gotta say you got me wet pretty fast. Only complaint is a few gramatical errors and the second two chapers are kinda short.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Way too short, however looking forward to part 4

Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Just not into it. Sounds like a dude wearing a dress.

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