genoharden35@gmail.com
Stop the presses!1 Genoharden finally wrote a story! I know it's not great, mostly because it was written from an insomnia-filled weekend. But it's enjoyable and I would love some feedback! So email me at genoharden35@gmail.com
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.83
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 4.00
Nipple-Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
LOVED the nipples!! Do you know how hard it is to find anything like this, much less quality content like this story, in our smut-filled internet?
I think you did a good job on the descriptions of the BE and NE (nipple expansion, I guess). Just enough to keep the mood without being bogged down. The bimbofication wasn't a great turn-on to me, but it was well executed. Overall, I have to say it was a very well written story about a distressingly neglected topic.
Let's face it: without nipples, boobs are nothing but shitless chest asses!
Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Incredible, please write more
Big D
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved the story! Can't wait for the sequel, but the bimboism was a bit ridiculous.
fdrifter
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I have to personally say that I loved the giant nipples. It's an aspect of BE that's pretty tough to find. It'll be a pretty niche audience that likes it, but I can say that we do exist.
Anonymous coward
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked the nipple-fucking, but the bimboization was a bit random/forced/unwelcome.
Duuude
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The forearm/soda can sized nipples were a big distraction (in a negative sense)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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