The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

G-Man001
Instructing the Tutor - Day 1 - Hour 4
The fourth installment.  Thanks to all those who have commented.  The conclusion will be posted soon.
Average Scores:
 Guuuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3 
The story is great. Please finish it.
 wyldcard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Outstanding story!!!  Looking forward to more!
 DosAuto 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
The only thing that i did not like about it was you giving away things like her getting a prego belly. it might just be me but i like things like these to be surprises
 Duuude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Nice series!  The "Day 1" implies a sequel, will there be one?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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