The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

isengard
autokid15@hotmail.com
Brooklyn and Maryse's Excellent Adventure
What if two college girls make themselves into lab projects
Average Scores:

myles
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Works fine for me, I enjoyed it

stan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

i liked the story, could be longer

atticus fincheroff
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Well, windows 7 is out and word 2010 is out so there should be no difficulty in opening the file. But that was a pretty bad format to put it in.
Loved the BE, can't wait for the 2nd one
Maybe include a male in the sequel?

mrflex2
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Never post in M$ file format use RTF!

coder4freecode
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Given the current state of things, my advice is to never save in OOXML. Microsoft is supporting ODF in the next major patch, yet they're not updating OOXML to match the approved standard version until the next major rev, possibly later. That should tell you something about Microsoft's commitment to the format.

DarkPhoenix
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Just repost the Damn thing

Apple
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

For those of you complaining that you cant open it. There is a Word 2007 reader free from Microsoft.com, But I agree that the author should have used a different format.

Genoharden
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Yep same here..... If only I could rate by description......

Adama
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

How about reposting this as an RTF document? Not all of us have MS Office 2007, including me.

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