Hour 3 of the saga...Thanks to those who have commented.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.13
obi138
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mrwhoop
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Better and Better, sorry I didn't comment on the other two but this one got me typing. Well done
Mr. Freeman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
please do not stop writing this story for a long time, G-Man. i loved every letter of it
david_mudkipz
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great story.
Personally, I prefer .rtf over .doc
sully52
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I enjoyed it. The description of her getting eaten out was detailed and hot.
A few misspellings that the checker missed-taught for taut for example but structure was good and it was an easy read.
zin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Now THIS is a good story, man, aside from a few grammar errors, this story is perfect. The writer is a pure genius!
D
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Wasn't sure about this series when I started but it's making good progress. Not big on the forcing someone to like it angle but the rest is good.
Keep up the good work and watch for the little grammatical issues.
Bappen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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