By popular demand, an edited version presented in word doc format. Thanks to all those who have provided feedback! Hour 2 of Mike and Katherine's tutoring session.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is a really great read, and I'm enjoying the AG tremendously. Just a few problems... first, and most obviously, the almost total lack of BE— but it seems like this is coming very soon. Secondly, all we really know is that her rear end is growing, but we don't have a good idea of how big it actually is. It would be nice to have a descriptive marker at some point. Still, it's a lot of fun and i'm really looking forward to the next installment! Keep it up, it seems to be going in a great direction.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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