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Continuing adventures of Melanie, this time we focus in on Tiger. Who gives up their life to serve a Goddess? This cool cat. Building up to much more growth in Part 3.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.50
Marcos
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I really find the last panel a ltltie offensive/hurtful. I had my belly button pierced by a professional when I first turned 16. My mom took me to get it done at a very well known shop in my hometown. It was pierced correctly and it still rejected and gave me a weird looking navel. Since then I have stretched my ears to an inch and have my septum and tongue and they all are fine. Any type of piercing will reject if it wants to since the body is trying to get rid of the foreign material. Im 17 now and working in a tattoo/piercing shop as a receptionist so I know what Im talking about. Don't just assume that since you get it done professionally it will be fine and stay in, some people just cant have certain parts of their body pierced.
tsokei
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well written but lacking in BE focus.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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