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A story of olde about a pregnant girl and a lonely doctor. Not a lot of BE, but hopefully a good story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.67
b
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Interesting, but it seemed a bit rushed, or maybe just light on the growth and characterization... She didn't have to grow onstage, but a little more descriptive text about her size at each stage might have been better.
I liked the concept, and the writing was good, but like I said, it was a little light one everything overall. It could have been a bit longer and it wouldn't have suffered, but on the whole it was nice. Sweet even. :)
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Please no more black-on-yellow. There also wasn't much in the way of actual BE in the story; She grew, sure, but we didn't "see" much of that.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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