The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

New Fantasies
A machine has been created to fulfill your every desire, even if it's something that's been deep down inside for a long time waiting to get out.  Hop in and take it for a spin, if you dare.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Pretty good.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm not sure why no one commented on this story - it was very enjoyable, if not long enough. Please do write more.

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