The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Alias_the_Archangel
jimmy.alger@gmail.com
New Fantasies
A machine has been created to fulfill your every desire, even if it's something that's been deep down inside for a long time waiting to get out.  Hop in and take it for a spin, if you dare.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Pretty good.
  
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I'm not sure why no one commented on this story - it was very enjoyable, if not long enough. Please do write more. 
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