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The Overflowing Bra

Alias_the_Archangel
jimmy.alger@gmail.com
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Michael is a nymphomaniac who is attending meetings for his "problem."  One night after one such meeting a doctor approaches him with a much more radical treatment.
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 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Great job! Usually I'm not for male-to-female stories, but you pull it off nicely.
 sully52
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Story was easy to read.  The only suggestion is to be more descriptive in some areas.  I would have like more detail on the body after the transformation.  More details in putting on the outfits and what they looked like would help too.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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