Plot? Who the heck needs plot?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.33
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
nice and to the point. typing with one hand=positive review.
Crash
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Yeah, not to pile on here...How 'bout more Kerry! That story's got so much room left.
Merkitty
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'm voting right down the middle because this really isn't his best work, I have read it for a while, and have seen better. This seemed not only rushed, but seemed to not have as much effort in fleshing out the characters to make it a worth while read.
Sorry Bill, but this is sub-par for your work, and personally this was way too short for my tastes.
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Short but good. I found some other boo-boos, a couple duplicate words, etc. "Carefully folding a Y.."?? Mystery to me! Could this be the "missing chapter" to some longer story? Only the author can know... More, please.
blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A good read, not hindered at all with the lack of a back story.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
and Bill Pratt comes in the niiiiiiiiiiight! Funny and sexy, though I would like to know the larger story as well.
One typo: "the beast seat in the house"? And one phrase I didn't get: "Carefully folding a 'Y' and sliding"
Other than that, typical Prattian quality.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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