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The Overflowing Bra

David Johnson
Gran Teton's Interlude Two: Shopping Trip
The second Interlude features Rose.

It takes place both after the events in Chapter Four of "Gran Tetons", but a couple of hours after those of the first Interlude as well.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Will the stock-boy experience any physical changes?
Sheesh! How can Chris be any more gorgeous than she is now?

How much longer until the next episode?

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not many descriptions of BE, but thoroughly entertaining; nice pics, too.

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