The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nico Robin: RUMBLE!
What happens when Robin eats a Rumble Ball? BE of course!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A creative story, with good imagery.

Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Too short, and as someone else said, those of us who aren't into this stuff may not understand. But the author has my encouragement to continue with the story.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

actualy the story is ok if you have watched the anime One Piece or have read the Manga otherwise it might be confusing

Munch Wolf
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

It appears to reference the anime series One Piece

Wild Card
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

I had a really hard time reading and following the story.
The names where odd and I could not quite follow all the events that took place.
Might be my skill in reading english, ... But I'm not so sure about that.

Never the less, its a story and stories keep this site alive.

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Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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