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Part 5 of my ongoing saga involving massive BE, PE, sex, and other weirdness.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.13
- BE: 4.13
- Characters: 3.88
- Technical: 4.13
OnlySaneMan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
I am downright disgusted that this is so popular. This story is not sexy in the slightest. What in god's name is sexy about innocent teenagers being tortured at the hands of scientists who would make Mengele blush, with body horror and utter mind rape so that they can't even scream. Oh yes, and don't forget the rape scene with Amy.
Yes, what Sussanne did to Amy is rape, no matter how you slice it. The people who read this and fap to it are the kind of people who keep women chained up to pits in their basement so that they can make their hermaphrodite suit. Make no mistake, I am not a prude. But I prefer my BE and PE to be consensual without breaking the character's soul underneath a wannabe-Mengele's foot.
I want to know the author's e-mail so I can ask him why? Why would you write something so cruel, so heartbreaking, so horrible that it almost reaches the level of Saolo: 120 Days of Sodom?! My eternal hate goes out to you, my wicked sir.
Soujou
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
While I like your story The Book of Spells more, The Secret Camp is still very strong, and I like the fifth chapter the best so far. I love the descriptions of Arlene and Ed's transformations, Arlene with her motherly, milking tits and Ed with his fantasticly massive cock. His 19 in. monster puts even Tim's beautiful 16 ½ in. cock to shame in The Book of Spells and I loved how huge he got!
I would like to see The Secret Camp continue. It has a lot of potential with the sexy transformations the cast is undergoing. My only tiny issues are that I liked the magic over science (although I figure you wanted to try something new), I prefered Claire's lack of balls (and how she would cum milk) to Brynn's having balls, and there were a few minor spelling problems (although you have improved in that regard since The Book of Spells).
Please keep writing! You are an inspiration to us all!
Alias
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great work, and I hope to see many more in the future! Storyline is intriguing and open to new characters, and the sex is fantastic. Keep up the good work!
Kowalski
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Yeah I just finished reading the whole series for the first time. Really strong.
I'm not giving you a 5 in any category only because I really see potential for an even better piece of work from you in the future - and I encourage you! My only criticism, for a story that almost sprawls, and has maybe one-too-many characters is that your heroine gets to wow-sized proportions pretty quickly early on, when maybe it'd be more delicious to have that part of the story slow down.
It's packed with massive growth though with both sexes plus even some TG stuff, and some sadistic glee in your bad guy. All in all =really fun and sexy and mutagenic and enjoyable.
Keep at it.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Have loved the whole series, it's just the right mix between sexual and story-driven. Keep up the great work!
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fabulous; looking forward to more of the realistic effect of the weight and bulk as the girls grow. Many thanks.
basil_jelly
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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