My take on the Sexified stories, taking place several years after the last official (?) one. Rachel's legacy lives on through two new protagonists...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.20
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 4.40
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
like the story, good job!
Oh-Sai
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The story was quite good, Amix. Keep up the good work. The scenes with BE/growth were a bit on the brief side (both in length and detail) but comparable to the overall length of the story itself. A few typos and odd grammar also are present, but does not detract from the overall strength of the story.
I look forward to further stories by you, and a continuation of this!
TheSaw
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
very well written. certainly looking forward to more of your writing.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Real good, sexy story, even though I'm not a big fan of muscle stories. Sound technically, few errors, but the dialog should have been separated into individual lines, indented, as others have said here numerous times.
Amix
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
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