The Overflowing Bra

Excellent, keep writing!

This was a very well done story, and I admit it really turned me on, but I have to say I didn't like that the two people got permanently changed into women against their consent (the guy said he'd not be against doing it again, or doing it for the full 24 hours, not being stuck like that for the rest of his life). That guy is essentially dead now, and I think that's very sad. Of course the woman who replaced him is going to think it's ok, she's the woman who replaced him. It's undeniably erotic, but to me it's unethical, so that decreased my enjoyment of the story.

This story is excellent, by far one of the better stories I've read recently. I hope that the author is still writing or has some more work I can find somewhere else. 

Excellent work.  Technically superior.  Very good writing.  Very creative, with especially excellent work describing the shifts from one paradigm to another.  Definitely in my top stories list.  Bravo!  Apple, hopefully you can point the author to our comments.

I think it was amazing how the person switched to their new personality without even knowing it.  That brought enjoyment more than any straight BE story out there.  Apple if you could get us the email of the original author I'd love to chat with them.

i loved the story

I really enjoyed this one.  TG is a favorite of mine, and I liked how you went about it.  I like how it ends, especially that the characters are happy with finding out about their past.

The story is good, but the file format is about the worst you could have done.
Making a PDF that exactly replicates the appearance of a plain text file gives you a combination of all the drawbacks of PDF and plain text, while throwing out all the respective advantages of each format. It's like going to a five star restaurant and ordering junk food: All the expense and waiting time of the restaurant combined with the bad quality and nutritional value of the junk food.

I liked the story, I thought it was interesting - good technical quality.  A pleasant read, length-wise.  It could've used a bit more BE.

While this is predominantly a TG story, with limited BE, it was certainly a very enjoyable one. It was very well written with strong characters and an interesting plot. Great read.

Really enjoyable. Quite a different perspective on the BE, being that the subjects think they are the ones in control. Told in a way that makes you want to keep reading to see what happens.
Nice find.

I liked it, I wish there had been a little more focus on the actual growth, and the feelings of their new bodies when they'd had their bodies (difficulty doing certain things, or enjoyment of doing certain things).  Maybe slightly bigger too, :p 
It was really a pretty good story though.

This is one of the stories that I found elseware on the internets. I'll ramdomly choose and add one to the archive when submisions are slow. Or you can PM me on the forum if you'd like to request the type of storie for my next upload.