A high school teacher accidentally ends up with one of her student’s strange gems. Her regular boring life quickly becomes one of confusion, mystery and lust. Prequel to ‘The Collection’.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.25
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 2.75
AUUUUUUGHHHH THATS NOT LETTUCE
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Promise not to take two more years-Objective Failed
tsokei
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The Doob.
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
You should really go over your stories a few times to proofread them for context and grammatical errors. "She had an organism and fell to the floor, completely covered in sweat" is more unintentional humor than erotic literature.
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Good start, but left us hanging in the end. Several dozen errors, especially the one that really threw me: "she looked at it through the light in the ceiling."
HUH? I think he meant "she looked through it at the light in the ceiling."
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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