Jenny decides to use her powers for profit, and takes off on a little "working vacation" after leaving some others with the "short end of the stick"...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.00
Ineligible
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very Free needs to lighten up. Incredible story, and your style of describing the growth was, well, amazing. Lets see a part two to this!
Beetlebomb
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Don't listen to Very Free, he seems like a faggot. (offense)
I too write when I can on my free time, I believe there's some stories of mine on here, but as for yours I really enjoyed it. The only thing that made me unhappy was that there wasn't more to read. Part 1 had great growth in it, but sadly 2 only had a couple descriptions of "grew an inch" etc. So maybe as a side note, and if it's not to much to ask, could you possibly put more gts into it for us small growth- mini gts fans? :) Thx, jack.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Overall lost a point because the author didn't know the difference between Costa Rica and Puerto Rico.
BE lost points because the story left us hanging at the end.
Tech lost a point because an otherwise excellent story, technically, was zapped by the author's inability to remember that "it's" is a contraction of "it is", and not possessive.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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