A brief tale about a young man with wild sexual fantasies and his encounter with a strange being from the Fifth Dimension. The devilish Great Gazoob allows Dan's varied fantisies to runaway into realms of impossibility before growing bored and leaving. A quick and dirty tale of breast expansion, giantesses, penis growth, ass growth, fat growth, muscle growth and a harem of impossibly lusty bimbos.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.86
- BE: 4.71
- Characters: 4.29
- Technical: 4.43
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Somehow I missed this one; went back and read it because of your recent submissions.
Again, fantastico! I didn't care for the "fat" thing, but that's personal preference.
I really liked the end (won't say what to avoid spoilers).
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like the others have said, there was a little of everything here. My only complaint was that it felt a tad rushed and the descriptions might have done with a little more detail, but with Gazoob being whatever he is, maybe that was what you were going for. Really though - that's just a nit-pick because your story was well written, well thought out and you kept track of changes quite well. Keep it up!
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Doc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This should DEFINITELY become a series. I haven't read something this great in a long time.
Lothar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Very original..... I liked it. Kind of a "Get To Know Your Fetish" story.
Hope to see a possible series!
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Frickin' love it! A regular fantasy buffet!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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