longer. better. more BE then ever before.
This heavily revised sequel to the first breast Queen follows Seven as she completes her BE based domination of voyager- and gets challenged for the title of Queen by someone you will not expect!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 3.67
konser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like it. the star trek thing did not bother me.
UghTooMuch
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
yeah. good BE. Grammar and writing was okay.
TrekFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
resplendentgorbachev
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I'm a StarTrek fan, and I would've enjoyed it more if it had not been for the over 200 spelling, grammar, punctuation, and especially the run-on sentences which were difficult to figure out.
deux_anges
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Started off well and was nicely written/edited but I slightly lost interest towards the end. Probably because I'm not a Star Trek fan, I may have missed some of the references.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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