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The Overflowing Bra

Unexplained Expansion 5: Catcher in the Sky
Finally! This story took a while. And guess what? There's one more to come! This time, Jean is in the middle of a cornfield when it happens. Also, more about what connects the stories. Enjoy!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I've been following these short for a while now, please Grenshaw, put me out of my misery and complete them, you promised us a final chapter that would complete the story - I'd love to know the ending, even if you don't yet ^_^ keep up the good work!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked it! But then I'm biased because I like balloons.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! Helium BE is always a favorite. Keep 'em coming!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

What can I say? Floating boobies! Yay! ;)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I don't know what that "yeah" guy is talking about. This story is awesome. Clearly either he didn't read it or he doesn't enjoy BE fiction in general.

Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I will admit that I only vaguely remember your original posting, but this time it left much more of an impression. An excellent story so far, and really leaves me wanting more, so don't quit! And that "yeah" guy who wouldn't even leave a real name... ignore that garbage. Your story ranks in the upper 10-15% of ALL stories on here in my book.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


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