The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Secret Storm
secret_storm_uk@yahoo.co.uk
Scene: Chat Room
A Female Member of a forum finds her body being shaped into another member's ideal woman in this short Tale
Average Scores:
 Tom
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Awesome Please finish it
 Biantai
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
A little too fast and to the point for my tastes, but it works well. I think the girl should have been shocked to see the changes happening. I love the overall plot idea!
 aryan man
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
amazing.
 john
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
It doesn't appear on the front page, but it's good, please continue.
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