Five girls out to celebrate a friend's birthday. Then Timmy shows up and things get interesting.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
PIzzaMan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well done! Although i prefer more natural boobs :)
ragnaroc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ya got me yankin' my yimminy. Hot story presented like a comical farce. "I wish..."
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story cracked me up! Timmy is one lucky bastard. Though, the BE could've been less abrupt.
BEman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Honestly, this is one of the most entertaining stories I've read on the entire site. Solid all around. I think I counted two or three technical errors out of 35 something pages.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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