The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Birthday Party
Five girls out to celebrate a friend's birthday. Then Timmy shows up and things get interesting.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Well done! Although i prefer more natural boobs :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Ya got me yankin' my yimminy. Hot story presented like a comical farce. "I wish..."

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story cracked me up! Timmy is one lucky bastard. Though, the BE could've been less abrupt.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Honestly, this is one of the most entertaining stories I've read on the entire site. Solid all around. I think I counted two or three technical errors out of 35 something pages.

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