The Overflowing Bra

More of this pls

Very very very very goooooood Please continue this story so she grows even bigger and more confident Goes off to show her breasts off and enjoy them P Maybe steal the measuring tape D D 

Anyway great work

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I really like the ideas in this story, and I understand the difficulty of writing in a non-native language.
I hope you don't mind that I re-wrote it for you :)

I also really enjoyed this story.  Your english is better than some people who ONLY speak english!  It would definitely be easier to read if you had someone proofread for you (I am willing to do this if you're interested - find me on the forum), and will only make your stories that much better.  Keep up the good work, and don't stop writing!

Overall I would have to say it was a good story.  There was a good balance between the overal story and expansion with some minor grammar issues but nothing major.  I hope to find another story written by you.

It's nice that you're practicing your English- keep it up, and you'll write like a native speaker some day.

I liked this story, the concept of "breast theft" is always something that I've enjoyed,) Like lailu said, it was short, sweet, and to the point, which was fine with me. The grammar wasn't an issue, but it might help to get a proofreader if you can. 
I hope you keep writing.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece and had to come back and read again! I hope you keep writing.

A few grammatical hiccups, but frankly I felt the writing was better than some writers around here who hold English as their mother tongue.
Pretty good, I'd keep it up. Maybe get some friends to proof-read for you.

I have read a similar story (I can't rmember where, possibly here) about basically the same thing.  It was not all that bad, considering the author was ESL -- few spelling errors.  I wish other authors gave as much attention to that.  So give the author the benefit of the doubt.

This story was perfect, besides the grammar. I enjoy short, sweet, and to the point stories. The BE was descriptive enough to match the overall story of breast theft in small increments and the characters were not described with to much detail, leaving a lot of room for your imagination

It's a cute story, the English is a bit poor but it is better than others I've read. 

The link was NOT missing, im not exactly sure what you mean by that.  Regardless, the story was reasonably good - description was a little lacking, character development wasn't great, either.  It was a little broken english and could have used a look over, but I liked the story idea and with more idea like that I can see you doing good stories.

I emjoyed the story and was able to disregard the poor quality of the Engish.   Many thanks.