The Overflowing Bra

Not bad post, leave it at my bookmarks!...

I thoroughly enjoyed all of your stories set in the Dodson universe. This one is my favorite by far. A shame your probably nolonger in the community as I would love to read more stories set in the Dodson universe, especially if it was a sequel to Fateful Nights.  

I'm a big fan of sexual TF and this is easily one of the best stories I've read in that regard. I still fantasize about being in Avril's place. 

I really liked your story. Excellent transformations and I liked the day after views we received from the transformed (although they were a bit to quick in the coping)
You're writing has improved so much since the first story I read, it's incredible.

Great story. It's good to see you back.
I dunno if you got my e-mails.
It would be great if you could write me back:
nisroc-kun@freenet.de
Ciao
Demon-Man

great read.  i was hoping for a sequel???

Not my thing. But regardless, it was very well written. It accomplished what it set out to be (a dark story), and it did it well.
Not quite as much BE as other things, unfortunately. The occasional typo made it in (it's/its errors, lack of punctuation, etc.) but much less than the average here.

Very nicely done, and good to see you writing again, Odd. I'll have to agree, the BE was a bit lacking; it basically got glossed over for other stuff. Now, don't get me wrong- the other stuff was great, but this _is_ a BE story site in the end.
I'm not a big fan of "dark" porn. Felt perhaps a little overbearing in this; it wasn't just wacky boobs growing and oh noes what will be done, peoples lives were being ruined. Meh, maybe it's just me getting to hung up on things.
Characters were alright, if nothing super impressive. It's porn, so not expecting any deep introspection or anything, but the lesbians prefering Teh Cock and their romance angle seemed a bit trite.
Technical quality was quite good. No glaring errors, only a small number of the usual suspects (its/it's, etc) cropping up. The interludes were a nice touch to break up the pacing, although I felt they were a bit _too_ much of a jar out of the rest of the story.
Overall a very good story and a decent read. I think the actual sex scenes were rather short and could have used a lot more embellishment, but given I prefer longer stories on all fronts I suppose that's not suprising. The whole "its the future and its different" backstory bit seemed to just slide under the radar; I would suggest either ignoring that part or playing it into the main story more.

Your writing in this story has shown a hugely significate improvement, please keep up this level of quality. It was nice to see how the darker overtone was handled. I agree with Daimon that there could be more description involved with the breast growth.

Odd,
You're truly becoming a great writer, and I see improvement in every story.
I especially liked the Ass Growth in this story.  I do however think that it (and the BE to a lesser degree) could use a bit more description and notice in the story.  E.g.slow it down and explain how the victim is feeling about it a bit more.  Describe it a bit more, etc.
ALl in all though, I'm really a fan and can't wait for the next story!!!!!

I like your stories. For me there could be more transformations and less stuff around. ;)

Awesome story

Nice to see you writing again.  A wonderfully strange story.  I don't mind the darker tone.  I'm just glad to see new that you haven't stop creating new stories.

"I hope you enjoy Fateful Nights"??  No, I did not. I found it disagreeable.  Very.

worth the wait to read, keep up the excelent work :)