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Part 2, allready!?! Yea, well hope you enjoy. Jake and Gen continue to spend the day together even with her increased Size and bust. They find that their love cannot be changed by the physical differences that they have.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.75
Jayden
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Just what the doctor ordeerd, thankity you!
one_eyed_jack
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Totally agree with ZenPaladin on this chapter. You have a very "realistic" style, and the off-screen growth is working amazingly in this story. Not really a diss here, but I feel like if you had an editor (or perfect grammar/spelling) this story would be 5s' across the board!
ZenPaladin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Again good stuff. The way the relationship changes. At first I was disappointed in the constant off screen growth but then I think I realized that the fact that it is slow enough to not be directly noticed actually makes it more fun and believable to me.
I like the way Gen's personality changes without her turning into a total dominating bitch.
Dr Know
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoy this story! I'm a huge fan of GTS especially of Mini-GTS so this is amzing for me! Just wanted to let you know I love your work, and please keep it up!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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