Chapter 3 in the ongoing adventures of Matt. With Bree grown out of control Matt needs help. What perfect timing when Candice shows up.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.00
EtherealVision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You're quick at writing em, I take back what i said about shortness.
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
These are nearly copies of the Master PC series.
Brokenangel099
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very nice work. Didn't see the cloning coming at all. I'm interested to see where you go with this from here.
TW
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Your writing has become better again ;)
And as long as you're pumping those stories out as fast as you do, I don't really mind the shortness anymore ;)
aryanman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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