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The Overflowing Bra

Milkmaniac
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The Secret Camp, Part 4
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Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Amazing series, one of my favorites.

Blazer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great series, I'm loving the new developments. Please, please, please keep them coming...

woo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Ah!Why did you have to stop there? I can't wait to read what happens next. Please don't keep us waiting too long this is great stuff!

bob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Can't wait for part 5...

SMAP
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

More good stuff here. Not a lot to say since it's rather late. Oddly, this won't run properly in Wordpad (it gives me an error and crashes), although OpenOffice manages just fine. Anyone else had a problem with it? I already re-DLed and extracted just to make sure it wasn't a random error.

Blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I was hoping the girls changes would continue of their own free will or because they can't control their lust but this has its own merits.

Dog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Dangit! What happened to Elise?

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