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First story, please comment!
Lisa, your regular 17 year old comes across a strange rock that embeds itself into her body and takes her kinky mind and body through a whole host of orgasmic transformations as she pleasures herself over and over again.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.82
- BE: 4.18
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.09
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
curious caller
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yup thats what I would do! looking forward to reading the second one
Stosh
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
goober
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I crave your creativity! so when is the next one due?
Sum Yung Gai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Just the kind of freaky I like. I'd love to see what more adventures Lisa can have with her self-modification skills.
Jooe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Great story, would love to read more.
Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Needs quote marks around dialogue but an excellent story regardless! For the love of god please do write more! It's not often I give out a 5, hell it's not often I give out anything above a 3, you're good. Keep it going!
Aaack
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent story, unpredictable too, it was a wild ride.
I sincerely hope for G-Man to write the second (and third, forth, etc) part of the story.
VLAD
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Eiffel
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Can't wait for the rest of it!
TD
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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