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Just a straight forward story about massive growth and enjoyment.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.86
- BE: 4.43
- Characters: 3.71
- Technical: 4.71
Kam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Awesome!
really really well done
HXC
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great! an amazing ride. Just as a nitpicky thing, at first when the BE initially started, the description of growth by nothing but cup size was a little offputting, but after that it really got good!
keep it up!
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
The first great "wow" story I've read in a VERY long time! Definitely too rushed, but I hope this is only a sign of things to come in the near future. Keep up the great work.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Just as you said in your description, this was a straightforward story of BE and I really enjoyed it just for that. Could have more description of the growing breasts though. And it would also be nice to have more on the female protagonist's feelings on the BE.
Nevertheless, great stuff! Keep up the good work.
gman1
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A hurried effort, but certainly fun. Next time slow down and enjoy the ride, but definitely keep it up!
Ouroboros
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Overall, it was a pretty solid story. It was a bit on the short side though. Perhaps next time spend more time describing each stage of her growth and the new fun things she could do with her newfound assets. Either way, I'm looking forward to another story from you!
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It's a well written story. I'm a sucker for stories with "wow" in them. My only complaint is that it seemed a bit rushed. Perhaps it's because you can never have too much of a good thing? I do hope you add more stories!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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