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The Overflowing Bra

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The Investigation of Caley Prentice 1-4
Young Caley Prentice has assets to make just about anyone jealous. Gorgeous, wealthy and incredibly stacked she doesn't seem to lack for anything... except kindness. Can one girl really have it all? Some people don't seem to think so.
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cpplink
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is an extremely well thought out, well written story. It has been a while since I have seen another of its quality. Hope you see to continue this soon

anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Definitely one of the best stories on this website, incredibly well-developed. I think the only reason it hasn't received more attention is that it's kind of hard to find. Please don't leave us hanging! An update would be well appreciated.

Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm so glad I found this story again. Hopefully this site will be its new home on the internet and that updates will be coming soon. Normally I only like stories that focus on height increase, and this one obviously takes a while before our female protagonist's height increases. Yet the writing is so good and the story so interesting that I enjoyed it nonetheless. And now that the height increase has begun in earnest, I am overjoyed.

Fantastic story, one of the best I've ever read online. Please update!

anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I can't wait to read the next part. The story is just damn interesting and I would put this on par with the best stories on this website.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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