The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Tompson
Unknown
Dinky Dick
A growth hormone makes a boy's cock grow huge, and his cum makes his doctor's breasts grow.
Average Scores:
 Rosien
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I loved it. Wanted more details with some of the scenes though. Kinda seemed cut off sometimes. I can't wait for the sequil
 Rosien_HoH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I love this one!! make a sequil!!
 Big Dog
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A good overall story i enjoyed it a lot
 Skeeve
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Needs better pacing and character introduction/development.
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