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The Tim The Enchanter saga continues with Chapter 9, to be concluded with Chapter 10. Tim uses his magical powers to sculpt and shape women to his will. Transformations include breast expansion and women with animal hybrid characteristics. Comments and suggestions welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.20
Twisted Transformer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Thanks for the comments. Chapter 10, the final chapter of the Tim saga is in progress and will be ready soon. Moolove, I'd love to read some of your stories. You should post them here on ToB when you get the chance.
Moolove
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I'm new to the web and been writing this kind of fantasy for years.
Nice to find someone else who enjoys animalisation as a concept. Nice work but I do worry about us really! Are we THAT bored with being us?
Twigboy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent descriptions, and a steamy as hell sex scene, one of the best I've read in a long time. I could've used a *bit* more background on the Tim character, like how he got his powers - but maybe you're saving that for the final chapter (?) Otherwise, A+
Myconid
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
All I have to say is awesome! A must read if youre a fan of stories like this
pebbles
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wowzers. i loved this one. you really took it back to the roots...amazing descriptions and a keen eye for detail. will be sorry to see it conclude with ch.10.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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