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The Overflowing Bra

Dexter Sinister
State of Emergency II
The State of Emergency progresses on as citizens throughout the city are transformed into their utmost desires.  In this installment, Angelo and Morgan find a way to make the catastrophe work for them.
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BEman
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I like it. Good setting and plot with a great cliffhander. I'll be waiting for the next one.

Dexter Sinister
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Uploaded a new file, folks, in what's hopefully a better text encoding.

xxxecil
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

bad formatting, incomplete. Has potential, but needs to be finished.

0wl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I really liked where it was going, but there needs to be more. I hope there will be more?

Slak
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Woah man, the formating makes it next to impossible to enjoy.

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