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The Overflowing Bra

Jason O
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Desire's Gift - Part 1, the Transformation
A man is granted the power to make his dreams reality, so he makes his transgender fantasies come true. Illustrated!
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 SavageCabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Disappointed it ends here...
 benji_dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
This is a great story!  I only wish the author included an email so I could encourage them to make a second part!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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