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The Gran Teton's series continues...finally!
In part four, our trio is on the hunt for the remaining bottles of the tonic, hoping to find them before things get totally out of control...
...and, of course, things get totally out of control...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.80
demon101
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Would love to see a part 5 and more to this story. If David isn't going to finish the story perhaps another writer could give the next part of the story the worth they deserve?
BEman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! Can't wait for the next part.
jayessell
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! Will I have to wait ANOTHER 6 years for the conclusion?
BTW.... I'm unclear as to the physical aftermath of the women exposed
to the orgasm-radiation but who did not ingest any of the soda.
I'm guessing .... no change.
Those who did... Rose sized, despite an initial initial Chris size.
(Because the chain reaction goes to XXXXXXXXXXXXXL then resets to XXL (like Rose.))
The problem with that, the girls who only sipped would be XXL rather than D.
cpplink
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This has got to be one of the best B.E. stories I have ever read, if you can even call it a B.E. story. This was one of the finest pieces of literature I have ever read on the internet. The actual B.E., the storyline, the characters, everything was excellent. Here's hoping Part 5 comes out soon.
Jay
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good! Great illustrations! I think illustrations add a nice flair to BE stories. I love this story and 99.9% of it is good. My only complaint is to not put in stuff like your own comments on the situation. I understand how that could usually be funny, and you almost pulled it off! I know you can do it, just pick better times to do it. In other words, you made the right comments, just in the wrong places. And remember that is just my personal preference! But I still loved it! Can't wait for part 5!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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