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The Overflowing Bra

Tim The Enchanter: Chapters 1 - 7
The first seven chapters of the Tim The Enchanter short stories. Tim uses his magical powers to sculpt and shape women to his will. Transformations include breast expansion and women with animal hybrid characteristics. Series continues with Chapter 8 by Twisted Transformer.
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

The chapters are nice and short; you really make it work!

Above Ground Pools
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Is anybody strong in radio here? We need a colleague who would tell us briefly about the transistor T2. I hope there are radio amateurs here. If it`s not on the subject at all, then I`m sorry. I have to write because I have no choice. PS: if the spelling is not right then also I'm sorry, I'm just 13 years old!...

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


BE lady
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

loved everythign about them

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

some of the chapters could be longer, but the series is really enjoyable thus far. looking forward to further installments.

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