Jake returns home to find friends, and a cunning ex-girlfriend with a "big" surprise waiting for him.. (comments welcome and appreciated, thanks for all the feedback on the first version.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.29
- BE: 4.86
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.71
Beetlebomb
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like the others, i loved it but the shrinking maybe shouldn't be included. the story could go great without anymore shrinking. just my opinion. overall great story though!
Soylent
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm not into the shrink aspect at all but give thumbs up to growth, cb, and be. Look forward to ptII and hope there is possibly of some more cb, mpg, and overall growth!
TW
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really liked the writing style, and the BE is awesome, but I seriously dislike shrinking, which is why the overall enjoyment suffered a bit for me. I'd still very much like to read more, maybe without shrinking next time ;)
ice0wl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hek
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good story to it, can't wait for the other chapters.
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very impessive. I like the combo of growth and shrinking. The charecters are really well described too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
HH
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great, sexy story...looking forward to additional chapters.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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