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Scientist Taylor and the slightly impulsive Sarah recuperate from the spontaneity of part one, and gear up for the impending growth yet to come... I think this may just end up being a trilogy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.91
- BE: 4.73
- Characters: 4.64
- Technical: 4.27
thedude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really great story. I know it's been a while but I'm hoping there are more parts to come. Only thing I have to say has already been said - the size is a little hard to grasp. I've never seen an L cup so don't know how big that is... Really hope there is more though!
Gubrats
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Ah, I see it was posted over 3 years ago now, so this is a long shot, but I only just read this story and I really enjoyed it, pretty much everything you could want in a BE story :). The characters were very likable, especially Sarah, (not least because of her impulsiveness ;) ) and the BE was described very well. The actual size is becoming hard to get my head around though, since 'L' cup is something pretty much no one is familiar with, so some more description will be needed once you go... beyond the alphabet ;).
Really really good story though, would love to see a part 3, or even more... :)
Tarquin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Absolutely terrific story, very well detailed. Not to be TOO greedy, but this will take at least five episodes to develop properly. Wondeful atention to reality, can't wait for the next chapter. Many thanks!
not so silent bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story, man! can't wait for more!
clib
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I can't wait for part 5! This is one of the best BE stories I've read in a long time.
sparky
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I can wait for the trilogy.
Joe Monday
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is developing into a great story. I like your description of her transformation... and I have a soft spot for characters that just can't get enough of it! ; )
puzzler
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Ouroboros
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wow, really great stuff, I just wish each installment was a little bit longer. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Even better than the first!
Spartacus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MOAR MOAR MOAR, I love it!
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