The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Change In Style
Gloria keeps getting packages in the mail with new clothing that changes everything about her life.
Average Scores:

Mango Tree
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great story. Very hot. Excellent pacing.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed how the story and character slowly changed over the week, and the use of the events of one day being a chapter. Well-written and thoroughly enjoyed.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I thought the descriptions and characters were great, as well as the overall theme. I was in fact hoping for more - bigger boobs, Claire getting some "Packages," maybe some of the students. The BE was mostly sidelined and almost an afterthought.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

great story, you got good talent but
i find the BE description lacking, and spread out too far in the story, and text is good...but word is much better

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Very hot story. Kept me "up" for a long time.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

It's a lot easier to read where it was previously posted, at the MC Story Arhive:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Cold Dragon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I feel that this is probably one of the best stories I have read in quite a while, up there with the original RUMOR MILL.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Please ignore my previous review, I was a bit angry at the time.

Please try harder next time though, as the format isn't too great on the eyes.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I'm not sure you could have made the format any more annoying.

I lost interest by the time I hit the third sentence of the first file. Why not take up knitting instead of butchering English?

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