Not much story line in this one but I think that you will like it. I am now fresh out of ideas so please comment or email me. My email adress is in the story at the top. Enjoy
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
xarinth
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I am hoping to see more of this, especially interested in what is going on with the out of body experience, as well as the cop and the girl from this scene too. Where are they working? What is going on? Who are the other girls? How did they get taken? There is a lot of room for you to expand on all of that, so I am hoping you do. And don't be afraid to make the scenes a little longer, and each way the girls were taken a little more perverse, that is all the fun of this genre. =)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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