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In this installment of Unexplained Expansion, Carrey is out for a jog and suddenly her breasts start growing! But will she notice in time? (Of course not!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another fantastic story in the series featuring my favorite type of BE. And now a possible link to tie them all together -- but what of the woman in the first story, who was indoors at the time?
ThunderBird
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could have elaborated on the BE a bit more, like in the previous episode, but otherwise, another great story, well done! I especially liked the reactions of the heroine, and the fact that some background is beginning to unfold in the epilouge.
Can't wait for the next episode!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Another awesome story by my new favorite writer.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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