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Here is part 2 of the story. More to come...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.45
- BE: 2.82
- Characters: 3.73
- Technical: 3.45
Aileen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Leona
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Rosario
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great second installment. Like someone else mentioned, this one had a much better stopping point than the previous installment (note I'm not calling them chapters, because it almost seems like there could be independant chapters in each of these 2 installments). Certainly peaked interest in "subject 3" and the scene between Amy and Brynn at the end worked a lot better than the last one, but then again, Amy's BE scene in the previous install was emotionally charged with pain and suffering during her growth (which means your writing style worked perfectly), but it had a nice turnaround to help make up for it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next release!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent work. Interesting, detailed and well-written. I look forward to further installments, keep it up!
Hell-Scythe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This had a better stopping point. I felt that part 1 stopped in an odd place. I can't wait for more.
DarkPhoenix
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excuse Me.....MOAR! MOAR!
Ahem. I eagerly await the next installment. Thank you
Hipples
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Oooh I want to know more about subject 3 now.
dabucknasty
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
that was good, keep the stories coming
ice0wl
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
More please, but maybe with some more BE.
DHoose
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well that was short. Good! But short :(
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