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Lizzie is spending a quiet day on a lake when suddenly her breasts start growing for no reason at all. And the only way to go is up...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.38
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.75
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Delete the first paragraph. Otherwise, it is an excellent short story.
Ben
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Only one questin, what's the active x for?
HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just love these stories. Each one seems to be a tiny bit more detailed than the last.
And of course it helps that this is my favorite genre of BE. :)
SkeetSkeet
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I absolutely love the series and look forward to future installments. I understand that they will always be shorter BE stories so there will not be as much character development as in others. However, the grammar and BE quality was outstanding. Excellent work.
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Reminds me of Harry Potter's Aunt whatsherface. Like Stretch said, I thought it ended too soon. Needs to be a little less short.
Stretch
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
This story seemed a bit too brief to really get into it. The grammar was excellent but there really wasn't enough content to feel involved. As a writer you deffinately have tallent but I think all your missing in this case is to write a longer story.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome, man. You're my new favorite author. I love the little details as the situation worsens.
ThunderBird
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, like always:)
When can we get to see more? Maybe a few pictures? Revealing the reason for all this seemingly unconnected BE?
Just my questions though...:)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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