The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Rumour Mill: Vice Versa: Tuesday Afternoon
Mike gets moving on his grand scheme for vengeance, but Terry’s watching. So’s Suzy. And Danny. And Lindsay. Can’t a guy get any freaking privacy at Hübsches-Mädchen High?

Nope. Doesn’t look like it.
Average Scores:

Shaving Products For Men
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Interesting, but still I would like to know more about it. Liked the article:D

Chase
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Always happy to see a new chapter up, and I agree that your current post length is fine. I much prefer to see shorter entries more often.There is no reason to complain that older posts get moved down too quickly, as this site only gets one or two posts a week. The solution is to just extend the last 10 so that you can page backwards by date. Not your problem. Thanks for you efforts!!

Webbster
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great as usual.

PrattFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Keep on writing, Bill! Please post them as you write them rather than waiting for the story to be complete...the suspense would be too much.

GREAT story!

Uggh
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Why didn't you list this in one document with different chapters rather than take up 5 spots on the Last Ten page and force other authors off prematurely? At the very least you could have included them in the same zip file.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: