It’s been a long, dull month for Mike Wagner. Beaten nearly to death by an irate boyfriend after carelessly using the amazing Master PC program, Mike can finally talk again and the first thing he asked for is, you guessed it, his laptop. But when the sexy daughter of his erstwhile roommate comes for a visit, will Mike escape the hospital alive?
And if he does, what surprises has the Vice Principal prepared for him?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yay! Bill Pratt is back with us!
After his previous attempts at marathon works ( like the original _Rumor Mill_), it seems he has decided to make smaller, easier to read (and I suppose, write) chapters for our consumption.
He successfully employed this method in his previous epic, _Ed's Dreams_, so I applaud him for keeping a good thing going.
I think it is more enjoyable to get a chapter every day or week, than to blow the whole thing in one sitting. Helps prolong the experience, you know.
Thanks for starting another ambitious project!
halfelf
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I only wish there was more story to read here. Nice work. Keep it up, please.
MasterPCFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the Master PC series and this is one of the best! Keep writing!
Pratt Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Lovin it keep it coming, don't hold out on us for to long this time Bill.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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