The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Poker Night
A bunch of VERY busty ladies play some poker but instead of betting with chips, they bet with cup sizes.  a lot of breast shrinkage, and a LOT of breast growth.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

truly magnificent. love the characters, love the competition for size, great story.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I liked this story very much. Again, it ended very suddenly and left me wanting more. I liked the characters in this one, but I felt that it was too hard to tell the sizes of the girls thoughout the game. Besides that, it was a great story.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This was a well-written story from a technical standpoint, but I felt that the conclusion and plot setup was a bit weak. The characters are strong, varied, and interesting. However, I just felt that the reasons for expansion, and the causes, were very random and strung together. This story is just an expansion scene, and I would like stories to have more plot and substance behind them.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Solid story, well written. What more can be said?

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

This is actually an old story, one of the ones only available on the BEA members section of Union Graphics. So I don't know if Steve Palmer is still writing. But I would definitely like to see more by him, in any case.

Wild Card
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Wow! A stroy written by Steve Palmer. Didn't see those a long time.
Never the less, Loved it.

Thumbs up!
keep on writting and keep them illustrations comming!

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Might have been better to start with slightly smaller breast sizes so the size change during BE would have been more impressive.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

What Double S B said. Also, it seemed to end rather abruptly.

Double S B
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

A little shorter than I expected, but I think it would make an interesting series if Mr. Palmer decides to write a sequel. I would've given it all 5's but I feel like there are some plot holes as to how the cup size exchange takes place, how they will replenish their stock in 30 days, and how they all met in the first place. Otherwise, the details were excellent, the picture was an excellent touch, and the idea was great. This was a top quality story and I hope there is one to follow and explain a little more.

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

what sorry

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

great story

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: