Models, whiny brats, and faithless boyfriends beware! The Queen of the Dark has returned and she’s still not taking any prisoners!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.64
- BE: 4.07
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.64
HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Good premise, characters were promising but lacking cohesion.
Eternal Newbie
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great premise, good stuff, but Kerry isn't sadistic enough. She's supposed to be the Goddess of EVIL, but some people get off way too easy or even come out ahead after meeting her. Just getting turned into a slut is pretty tame by BE standards .Also, more weird, non-consensual transformations is always better. Still, a great story. More!
adept
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun, strong characters and a great flow. Only quibble is that there wasn't much BE, but I'm sure the next installment will have double the amount for good measure. Look forward to it!
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
These stories are a lot of fun. More please!
Kerryfan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Zaero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been visting this site for years, and this is easily some of the best stories I've read thus far! The only thing I'd love to see more of is more breast expansion and how about some girls getting a gigantic ass? That'd be awesome ;-)
Ice0wl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A good addition to one my new favourite stories.. hope there's going to be lots more!
Miranda
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A great story. Well worth waiting for. I love the character of Kerry.....she's my heroine........hope there's more story coming with lots more unwanted changes. The nastier the better..nothing turns me on more than a story full of non-conscensual changes... more big boobs would be nice.....lol.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Easily the best story I've read here since this archive opened.
ghoomba
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please keep writing. Its been good so far:)
Pratt Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
More dammit!!! Great stuff!
buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
the story was good I hope to see more soon
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the comment about Edmund Burke.
Ben
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just wondering, did you use Kerry becasue of Kerrigan from StarCraft?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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