Steven's heart is filled with frustration about a female friend. Is that the reason why he reacted the way he did upon touching an old relic, and why everybody since that moment reacts so strangely on a touch of his hand?
Is the cause even important when the effects
are so interesting!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.56
- BE: 4.56
- Characters: 4.44
- Technical: 4.33
Above Ground Pool
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Somewhere in the Internet I have already read almost the same selection of information, but anyway thanks!!...
zymurgy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well written, and I enjoyed the development of Steven's powers, and his awareness of them. I also really liked the mental changes that took place as well, the rewritten histories, and the fake breasts.
BigOleShamrock
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it. Whit rabbit never stops impressing me. Eagerly awaiting the continuation.
panachemc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable story. Look forward to more. I was teased with the reference to drugs-hope there might be some actual intoxication scenes.
Matt0529
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Congrats! GREAT STORY! Love transformations to "artificalness" and espically "bitchy/stuck-up/snotty" attitdue adjustments!
Has me checking daily for part two...
Anyone who likes this story should check out another this author wrote called "Act It Out" which you can search for... (not at this site)
Mr. Rolyat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A very nice story that covers different points of view when the change occurs. I'm wondering how the 2nd story will turn out. I very muched enjoyed you type of tf too especially the fake tits.
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
An interesting story, and I can't wait to hear the rest.
Nameless
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Duffman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story!!!...especially the ending
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